Re: [BNW] Conscription

[Theo McGuckin <tsm@jlab.org>]

> Just a couple of minor notes on language style.  1) Change "wants to" to
> "will" (2nd line, 2nd paragraph).  2) Remove the "Please".  Simply state
> "Contact M. Santor..."  All things considered, though, I like!

One more thing that would really make cold on a subtle level, "forget" to
sign it.

-Theo McCracken, whose thoughts and ideas are solely his own and do not, 
in any way, reflect those of Jefferson Lab or its staff. Unless of
course there is any money to made off those ideas, in which case the lab
says: "Gimme, gimme, gimme!"