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Re: [BNW] Conscription



My game is set about a month behind realworld time.  Thanksgiving is
approaching and the Goliath in the group - registered, but not in
government
employ - has been 'volunteered' by Delta Prime to help with crowd control
for the annual Crescent City Thanksgiving Day Parade.  Just for fun, here
is
the letter I am handing him at the start of the session.  With three
Registered PCs in the group, I will probably use them throughout the
campaign - plot device and feared prop in one!  I tried to make it cold and
impersonal and leave no chance for misunderstanding that it is not a
request.  Please let me know what you think.

Howie

Just a couple of minor notes on language style.  1) Change "wants to" to
"will" (2nd line, 2nd paragraph).  2) Remove the "Please".  Simply state
"Contact M. Santor..."  All things considered, though, I like!

B. D. Flory
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