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Re: [BNW] Conscription
My game is set about a month behind realworld time. Thanksgiving is
approaching and the Goliath in the group - registered, but not in
government
employ - has been 'volunteered' by Delta Prime to help with crowd control
for the annual Crescent City Thanksgiving Day Parade. Just for fun, here
is
the letter I am handing him at the start of the session. With three
Registered PCs in the group, I will probably use them throughout the
campaign - plot device and feared prop in one! I tried to make it cold and
impersonal and leave no chance for misunderstanding that it is not a
request. Please let me know what you think.
Howie
Just a couple of minor notes on language style. 1) Change "wants to" to
"will" (2nd line, 2nd paragraph). 2) Remove the "Please". Simply state
"Contact M. Santor..." All things considered, though, I like!
B. D. Flory
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