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[HoE] Deadlands: From the Ashes: "A Savage Race"



							    DEADLANDS: FROM THE ASHES
								      "A Savage Race"

									TEASER

																			FADE IN:

EXT. HIGHWAY

where our favorite group of refugees is trudging west.  A short distance
behind, Levi slowly guides his tractor over the broken surface of the
highway.  An improvised flatbed on the rear of the tractor carries some of
the refugees.  A beat to establish, then

		ELIAS
	Levi!

ELIAS enters frame, waving down LEVI.  Levi pulls the long-nose to a stop,
and leans out his window.  Levi and Elias both shout to be heard over the
engine.

		LEVI
	Yeah?

		ELIAS
	We've spotted a town on the
	North horizon.  I want you to 
	take a few people and check it
	out.  We need food and rest.
	Badly.

		LEVI
	You got that right.  Get these
	people out of the flatbed, though.
	Neighbors ain't always neighborly
	these days, and I don't want to
	worry about 'em.

		ELIAS
	What about Gerry?

		LEVI
	He's staying up here with me.
	I'm not letting that kid out of my 
	sight.

Elias smiles and moves toward the rear of the vehicle.  Levi bellows

		LEVI
	Jarrod! Grant! Bart!
	   (beat)
	Saddle up!

																			CUT TO:

EXT. SETTLEMENT WALL

A mish mash of metallic bits- mostly car parts.  As Levi pulls his truck up
to a gap in the wall, an armed man steps out from behind the wall into the
gap.  The rifle he's carrying is pointed at Levi's head.
	Levi stops the truck.

		SENTRY
	Step out of the truck!

Levi complies, as do BART, GRANT, and JARROD.

		SENTRY
	Advance and be recognized!

Another sentry steps from the other side of the gap, gun slung at his side.
 He doesn't appear ready for action: his long, many-knuckled fingers are
wrapped up in knots.  As he approaches the posse, he rapidly untangles his
digits.  Call him FINGERS.

		FINGERS
	    (to sentry)
	Ease off, buddy.  The army hasn't
	paid you in years.

Sentry loosens up a bit- but only a bit.

		FINGERS
	Welcome to-
	     (beat)
	umm...
	     (beat)
	Welcome to our town.  What's 
	your business?

		JARROD
	We need food and a place to rest.
	We're willing to trade for it.

		FINGERS
	I don't think that'll be a problem.

		JARROD
	For about forty people?

Fingers stares at Jarrod for a beat, and we

																			CUT TO:

INT. SETTLEMENT

as Levi, Jarrod, Grant, and Bart walk in.  The improvised structures are
built of similar stuff to the wall- discarded car parts.

		JARROD
	     (quietly)
	They must be scrounging from the
	highw-

Whereupon Jarrod is interrupted by a hail from the shadows of a building's
entrance.  The speaker is Jim CRABTREE.

		CRABTREE
	Mallery.  Jarrod Eliot Mallery.  Been
	a long time since I've seen a Templar
	out this way.

Jarrod- currently clothed in rags- shuts up and looks up.  We hold on his
confusion for a beat, and

																			FADE OUT

								END TEASER


								     ACT I

																			FADE IN:

EXT. CRABTREE'S PLACE

as our heroes approach Crabtree.

		JARROD
	Jim? Jim Crabtree?

		CRABTREE
	You never were very good at that
	part.  The disguises, I mean.

Crabtree steps out of the shadows, revealing his Templar's tabard.  It,
along with the rest of his clothing, is stained, torn, and generally beat
to hell.  Despite all of that, it still carries a certain majesty.  The
Maltese cross of the Templars is still a rich, blood red.
	Jarrod laughs out loud and takes Crabtree in a rough embrace.  A beat
passes, and Crabtree disengages.

		JARROD
	You never told me that part was
	important! You taught me to fight,
	to judge, and to die, but never how 
	to hide the damn cross right!

As Grant, Bart, and Levi look on astonished, Crabtree grins.

		CRABTREE
	Ingrate.  C'mon in.

As Crabtree leads the group into the makeshift building behind him, we

																			CUT TO:

EXT. HIGHWAY

as Levi and company return.  Jarrod isn't with them.  Elias meets the group
as they debark from Levi's truck.

		ELIAS
	I hope you have good news for
	me.

		GRANT
	Yes.  It seems as if Jarrod has 
	an old friend out there.

		ELIAS
	Oh?

		GRANT
	An old Templar friend.  From the
	sounds of it, he was Jarrod's men-
	tor.  Which means Jarrod's a Templar,
	too.

		ELIAS
	I know.

		LEVI
	You knew?

		ELIAS
	It was his business.

																			CUT TO:

INT. CRABTREE'S PLACE

as Crabtree speaks to Jarrod.

		CRABTREE
	     (grimly)
	Gateway went down, then.

		JARROD
	Yeah.

		CRABTREE
	    (sighs)
	That's going to make things hard.
	We traded with Gateway for a lot
	of our food.  We're gonna have to find
	another source.

		JARROD
	And you're still willing to trade some
	of it back to us?

		CRABTREE
	It's only right.  We got a lot of it from
	you to begin with.  Besides, with things
	as bad as they are now, we all have to 
	look out for each other.

Crabtree sighs heavily, and stands.  He moves to a window, and looks out at
the settlement.

		CRABTREE
	We are all each other's keepers.

		JARROD
	Is that why you've been in this town
	for so long?

		CRABTREE
	Six months ago, they needed a 
	champion.  These are good people,
	so I helped them.  Afterwards, I stayed
	around.  With things like they are, I
	couldn't just walk away.  It was only 
	a matter of time before they needed me
	again.
	     (beat)
	And I'm tired.

Jarrod listens, silent.

		CRABTREE
	I've been a Templar for almost six years 
	now, nearly from the beginning.  I've walked
	from one end of these wastes to another,
	and I've seen more than maybe even Simon.
	I need to rest.  Maybe retire.  And this is as
	good a place as any to do it.

He takes off his sword and lays it on his desk.  The sword appears to be a
marine's saber.  As Crabtree draws it from the sheath, we see it has been
sharpened to a razor's edge.  Crabtree looks at his reflection in the
blade, turning it back and forth a couple of times.

		CRABTREE
	And maybe, someday, I can lay this sword
	down.

		JARROD
	Jim-

Crabtree sheaths his sword.

		CRABTREE
	It's been so damn heavy lately.

Crabtree puts his head in his hands.  Jarrod reaches across, and lays his
hand on Crabtree's shoulder.  We hold for a beat on teacher and student,
and

																			CUT TO:

EXT. SETTLEMENT

inside the walls, as Elias exits Crabtree's place.  He moves toward the
waiting refugees, and announces

		ELIAS
	We can stay here for the night.
	Find an empty building, and sack 
	out.

As the crowd disperses, Jarrod steps up to Elias.

		JARROD
	And food?

		ELIAS
	Taken care of.  We'll trade for
	whatever this town can spare.

		JARROD
	Good.  Rest easy, Elias.

		ELIAS
	One more thing, Jarrod.
	    (beat)
	Your friend Crabtree is carrying
	a lot of guilt around.  Why?

		JARROD
	I don't know.
	    (beat)
	Maybe I should.

																			CUT TO:

EXT. SURVIVOR SETTLEMENT

night.  A beat to establish, and

																			CUT TO:

INT. JARROD'S ROOM

as he awakens.  As he sits up and shakes off the cloud of sleep, we hear a
dull, metallic sound.  Jarrod throws off his blanket, and throws on his
tabard.  As he rushes out, we

																			CUT TO:

EXT. LEVI'S TRUCK

where we can see someone rummaging around in the flatbed, where containers
of food are stacked.  A beat passes, and Jarrod enters frame, shortly
followed by Bart, Grant, and Crabtree.

		GRANT
	What's happening?

		JARROD
	Someone's stealing the food.

As the four watch, a man leaps from the flatbed to the ground, a bundle
under his arm.  He looks up and sees our heroes, and our heroes see him:
"Fingers" MacPhee.

		CRABTREE
	     (shouts)
	Fingers!

When Fingers hears Crabtree, he bursts into a weighted down run.  Our
heroes pursue, and Jarrod tackles Fingers.

		FINGERS
	     (almost whining)
	No! You have to let me go!

Shortly, Crabtree grabs Fingers by the arm and hauls him to his feet.

		CRABTREE
	C'mon, Fingers.  You know the penalty
	for theft.  Food theft, especially.

Jarrod walks alongside.

		JARROD
	The penalty?

		CRABTREE
	Death.

																			CUT TO:

INT. CRABTREE'S PLACE

where Jarrod is on a tear.

		JARROD
	-can't just execute him!  We
	caught him, no harm done!

		CRABTREE
	Not to you.  But this town holds
	together because of its laws.  Be-
	cause people know the penalty for
	breaking them.  If we ignore them,
	this town is going to come apart at
	the seams.  I won't allow that.

		JARROD
	These people are worth protecting,
	Jim.  You said it yourself.  

		CRABTREE
	These people are.  Fingers *was*.
	Now he's a thief.  But not for long.

Crabtree steps outside, sword in hand.

																			CUT TO:

EXT. SETTLEMENT

where a pair of burly men hold fingers.  A small crowd is gathered,
including a few of the refugees.  As Crabtree approaches the group, they
part for him, and the burly men push Fingers to his knees.  Bart and Elias
watch, but Grant is absent.

		FINGERS
	I was hungry, Jim! Don't-
	    (beat)
	The rations aren't enough!

Crabtree unsheathes his sword, and draws it across the back of Fingers'
neck.

		FINGERS
	I'm sorry, Jim! Ple-

Crabtree strikes.  

																			FADE OUT

								END ACT I



								   ACT II

																			FADE IN:

EXT. SETTLEMENT

still night.  As the crowd disperses, Jarrod intercepts Bart and Elias.

		JARROD
	We can't stay here.  I don't
	know him anymore.

		ELIAS
	Agreed.  We'll leave first thing
	in the morning.

		JARROD
	I don't know if we can wait that
	long.

		ELIAS
	We have to.  I would remind you
	that many of us are old, or injured,
	or crippled.  We need to rest here.

Jarrod opens his mouth to speak, but Elias holds up a hand to silence him.

		ELIAS
	We will leave first thing in the 
	morning.

																			CUT TO:

EXT. SETTLEMENT

morning.  Jarrod finds a PASSERBY, and inquires

		JARROD
	What did they do with Fing-
	    (beat)
	with the body?

The passerby cocks his head behind him, and answers,

		PASSERBY
	It's on the hill.

																			CUT TO:

EXT. THE HILL

which is apparently a graveyard.  The only headstones appear to be single
white rocks about the size of a man's head.  Many of the stones have a
black mark painted on them.  As Jarrod enters, we find a WOMAN placing
another stone- Fingers' stone.

		JARROD
	Is that Fingers?

		WOMAN
	Yes.  He was a good kid.

She reaches down and dips a paint brush into a half-empty can of black
paint.  With a single stroke, she marks Finger's stone black.

		JARROD
	What's the paint for? A lot
	of these stones don't have it.

		WOMAN
	The white stones are for most
	folks.  The ones that die from disease,
	or in an attack, or from a gunshot.

		JARROD
	The black ones?

		WOMAN
	Criminals.

Jarrod's eyes widen.  As he- and we- look around the cemetery, we find that
the white stones are no longer for "most folks".  The black stones
outnumber the white.

		JARROD
	      (whispers)
	Oh my God...

																			CUT TO:

EXT. SETTLEMENT

as Jarrod moves into frame.  He's in full Templar dress, it's late morning,
getting on till Noon.  We hold for a beat, and Crabtree steps outside as
well.

		CRABTREE
	Morning, Jarrod.
 	    (looks closely at Jarrod
	for a beat)
	What's up?

		JARROD
	This isn't how we do things,
	Jim.

		CRABTREE
	     (beat)
	You just came from the hill,
	didn't you.

Jarrod doesn't respond; he only stares.

		CRABTREE
	I'm sorry you had to see that,
	but it's necessary.

		JARROD
	For what? We're supposed to be
	fighting against the Reckoners,
	Jim.  Against fear.  But you're worse
	than any Walking Dead I've ever seen.
	This people are living in your shadow,
	because you've convinced them it's
	the only thing that'll protect them
	from the sun.
	    (beat)
	Maybe it's time they saw the light 
	again.

		CRABTREE
	We can talk about this later.  I've got
	things to do.

		JARROD
	This is important, Jim!

Crabtree points to a gathering crowd, who surround two men holding a third.
 The whole scene looks damn familiar.

		CRABTREE
	So's that.

And Crabtree stalks toward the crowd.

																			CUT TO:

EXT. SETTLEMENT

with the crowd, as Crabtree approaches, Jarrod close behind.

		JARROD
	Don't do this, Jim.  It isn't
	right.  

		CRABTREE
	    (spins to face Jarrod, furious)
	It is right because *I* say it's right!
	I am a Templar- *we* are Templars, 
	and we are the best shot at salvation 
	these people have!
	
Crabtree turns back toward the prisoner, who is now on his knees, and draws
his sword.  As he draws back to strike, Jarrod says

		JARROD
	Yeah.  I guess we are.

And intercepts the killing blow with his own sword.  Quickly, the prisoner
scrambles out from underneath the two Templars.  The two men who were
holding him begin to move toward Jarrod, but Crabtree waves them off.

		CRABTREE
	This is how it's going to be then?

		JARROD
	This is how it has to be.

And Jarrod strikes.
	What follows isn't a duel.  It isn't a dance of parry and thrust.  It's a
street fight.  It's dirty, it's ugly, it's brutal, and it's mean.  And
finally, it's over.  Crabtree goes down, Jarrod's sword plunged deeply into
his chest.  As his blood begins to seep into his tabard, the Maltese Cross
becomes less and less definable among the red, until it seems to disappear
all together.
	Jarrod, chest heaving, kneels over his fallen mentor and closes Crabtree's
eyes for the last time.  As Jarrod is wracked with silent sobs, we


								END ACT II



								    TAG

																			FADE IN:

EXT. THE HILL

where Jarrod stands in front of a freshly filled in grave, a brisk wind
snapping at his tabard.  Stoically, he stands and waits, until a man
approaches the grave with a stone.  A familiar sort of stone.  The man
places the stone at the head of the grave, and dips a brush in a can of
black paint.
	Jarrod puts his hand on the man's shoulder.

		JARROD
	No.

The man looks up at him, confused.

		JARROD
	No more black stones.

We pull back slightly, to see Jarrod's pack on the ground behind him.  The
corners of another Tabard poke out of the pack, and a second sword is slung
along side Jarrod's.
	The man shrugs, drops the brush back in the paint can, then leaves.
	We hold on Jarrod for a beat, alone on the hill.  Abruptly, he turns,
swings his pack over his shoulder, and begins to walk away.  As he moves
past the camera, we PAN to follow him, revealing the refugees of Gateway in
the distance.  As he looks down the hill at the people, he stops and says
to no one in particular,

		JARROD
	No more black stones.

With the faintest twinge of doubt in his voice.

																		FADE TO BLACK

[As always, questions, comments, and concerns are welcome.]